tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-248225079418598804.post8104028508760989921..comments2022-11-18T02:27:01.546-08:00Comments on Daily Yawp: April 23Robin Morrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03513405446296363130noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-248225079418598804.post-14598469744638023352010-04-24T18:28:08.789-07:002010-04-24T18:28:08.789-07:00I like the ending ...the oldie's last dream of...I like the ending ...the oldie's last dream of being on a harley riding through the fields<br />in the spring.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-248225079418598804.post-22805301516184728832010-04-23T20:44:48.343-07:002010-04-23T20:44:48.343-07:00Fine story. I especially like
They are always r...Fine story. I especially like <br /><br />They are always reminding us about the days and the months,<br />as if they could make us care, like our teachers tried to make us care<br />about the Romans and Spartans <br /><br />The potato flowers are nice, tooAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-248225079418598804.post-11503920185925094512010-04-23T17:39:46.549-07:002010-04-23T17:39:46.549-07:00Robin, nicely written. I like a little uncertaint...Robin, nicely written. I like a little uncertainty and your closing provides that. Nice image, and nice use of the prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com