Saturday, April 3, 2010

April 3

What I fear



My own cells turning rebel army

the fog of war

whites against reds

not wines not Russians

but blood

terrorists in private places

attacking the wrong targets

friendly fire

cells multiplying
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3 comments:

  1. Greg O'Connell Poet in SchoolsApril 3, 2010 at 5:25 AM

    Hi, Robin. I enjoyed the metaphor in "What I Fear". I look forward to returning to your blog. And I invite you to discover my work on the NaPoWriMo 2010 page at www.gregoconnell.com =)

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  2. lucychiliApril 3, 2010 at 6:34 AM

    small and powerful enemies
    well done
    janet

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  3. flaubertApril 4, 2010 at 5:25 PM

    Those are some powerful enemies. Well said!
    Pamela

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